Paratan21's Customs

[jaredthe79]

That Slash one is pretty cool! Love the arena on the side!

[paratan21]

Thank you!

[paratan21]

"Allow me to reintroduce myself, my name is Hov!" After a long departure from you lovely people due to a whole slew of reasons I won't get into, I'm back. New printer, two years of Graphic Design school under my belt and ready to crank out cards.
Here are some designs I've made during my sabbatical.
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Squares:

Triangles (not all of them are inspired by geometry, haha):

Wordmark:

and NXT (8x10):

Looking forward to hearing feedback!

[valguerra]

The hockey on on the top side were the player and the white meet. Looks a little weird. Maybe straight line instead of a triangle shape. The rest look cool. Great work.

[paratan21]

So maybe something along these lines? I like the bottom triangles so it doesn't look like I just plopped a rectangle in. It makes it feel incorporated to the rest of the design to me. Thanks for your critique!

[jaredthe79]

Like the NXT, however, I think you should create a box with the superstar's name on the bottom line of the auto box.

[paratan21]

Why's that? Do you not think the names in the background are satisfactory?

[jaredthe79]

Why's that? Do you not think the names in the background are satisfactory?

It might just be because I don't follow WWE that much, but I can't tell who any of them are.

[paratan21]

Right, that makes sense, but I think if it were someone that I wanted an autograph of I would know their name without it being printed. So I felt like using the type as a design element rather than as informal, if that makes sense. I get where you're coming from though.

[D.J.Williams55]

Just showing my dude paratan21 some love! One of the best graphic designers on SCF! Dude does some amazing work!