A few written words

[razzamaztaz]

I just got these words into my head, and wrote them down, man I think too much. When I finished writing them and read them I get so depressed:


Sharp little teeth, gnawing at you. Unmistakeable. You can deny what they are but they're there. Constant. Sinking into your soul, reminding you that you're missing life. It's right out there flying by. You're missing it. You. Are. Missing. It. When the teeth has gnawed right through your soul into the core of flesh and guts and dispicable parts you never knew you had you will once realise it. When it's too late, when it's over, when you're in a wheelchair or bed chained to aid and dependance, helpless. Right there and then when it hits you you give up your best primal scream. People around you say the ™™™™™ has hit her final gaga time and go for the diapers and straijacket. You know better, you remain quiet for the rest of your fraction of life, with empty eyes staring into faces who think there's nothing in them. There aren't. It's gone.


Linda

[spuds1961]

Wow Linda I hope you feel better after getting that off your chest,I'll say a prayer for you,as that was pretty depressing.

[CRJSr9]

damn linda-thats deep.i like to write stuff down like you.i could never write that on a sportscardsite but hey thats me.god bless you and remember there's always tomorrow,and grab life by the ball's and squeeze it for everything its got. its your choice if you want to sit back and watch it pass you bye.

[Star_Cards]

I love that!!! Yes it's depressing but also inspiring. Everyone goes through times when they think if they are wasting their life or not. Reading this makes me want to take more chances.

This would make a great song. I can see someone like Radio Head or Marilyn Manson singing it.